Tom got up at half past eight. He didn’t wait on his brothers, but went out on the street, where he and some other guys started to pelt each others with snowballs. Suddenly they heard the sound of a glass, which fell into the ground; Tom had hit a fire-alarm, and the other boys ran quickly away. Two minutes later the firemen arrived. “There is no fire,” said Tom. “I broke the fire-alarm with a snowball and though that I better should stay here and tell the truth.” – “That’s right,” answered the firemen, “that is, what everyone should do.” An old gentleman, who heard what had happened, gave Tom 5 pound, whine he said. “When I was soldier in the 1st World War, I saw many brave young men, and you have been just as brave as one of them.” Umiddelbart vil jeg hvert fald rette dette. Mener ikke man siger oclock når det ikke er på slaget af en time.
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He didn't wait for his brothers Suddently which fell onto the ground er ikke sikker :P
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though --> dog... thought --> troede Vil tror at du ville skrive while i stedet for whine... ? Jeg tror bare at jeg ville skrive "which fell to the ground"
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Tom got up at half half past eight. He didn’t wait on his brothers, but went out on the street, where he and some other guys started to pelt each others with snowballs. Suddenly they heard the sound of a glass, which fell to the ground; Tom had hit a fire-alarm, and the other boys ran away quickly. Two minutes later the firemen arrived. “There is no fire,” said Tom. “I broke the fire-alarm with a snowball and though that I should stay here and tell the truth.” – “That’s right,” answered the firemen, “that is, what everyone should do.” An old gentleman, who heard what had happened, gave Tom 5 pound, while he said. “When I was soldier in the 1st World War, I saw many brave young men, and you have been just as brave as any soldier.”
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Tom got up at half past eight. He didn’t wait for his brothers, but went out on the street, where he and some other guys started to pelt each other with snowballs. Suddenly they heard the sound of a glass falling onto the ground; Tom had hit a fire alarm, and the other boys quickly ran away. Two minutes later the firemen arrived. “There is no fire,” Tom said. “I broke the fire alarm with a snowball and though that I better should stay here and tell the truth.” – “That’s right,” the firemen answered, “that is what everyone should do.” An old gentleman, who heard what had happened, gave Tom 5 pound, whine he said “When I was a soldier during World War 1, I saw many brave young men, and you have been just as brave as any soldier.” Der er heller ikke bindestreg i fire alarm. De ting jeg har understreget, er fordi jeg ikke kan forstå hvad du mener. Kan du ik lige skrive det på dansk?
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PS. Jeg har ikke rettet tegnsætning...
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and though that I'd better stay here and tell the truth passer vist bedst i #5
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#7: Jamen hvad mener han med det? Man kan da ikke sige "though that"
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måske mener han thought altså "at mene" - Han mente det ville være en bedre ide at blive her og vente´?
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#9: Nååh ja... Så skal den hedde sådan her: "I broke the fire alarm with a snowball and I thought I'd better stay here and tell the truth." Hvad med det der "whine" der er smidt ind midt i det hele??
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Nu ved jeg ikke, hvor højt et niveau engelsk, det skal være, men her er mit input (korrespondent-niveau, så det kan være du skal lade nogle af de oprindelige ‘skønhedsfejl’ stå alligevel :o)?!): ************* Tom got up at half past eight. He didn’t wait for his brothers but went into the street, where he and some other guys started to pelt each other with snowballs. Suddenly, they heard the sound of glass that fell onto the ground. Tom had hit a fire alarm, and the other boys quickly ran away. Two minutes later, the firemen arrived. ’There is no fire,’ Tom said. ‘I broke the fire alarm with a snowball and thought I better stay and tell you the truth.’ – ‘That’s right,’ answered the firemen, ‘that is what everyone should do.’ An old gentleman, who heard what happened, gave Tom 5 pound as he said: ‘When I was soldier during the 1st World War, I saw many brave young men, and you have been just as brave as any soldier.’ ************* Nedenfor finder du forklaring på rettelserne (baseret på det jeg husker fra skolebænk-tiden) hvis du altså gerne vil vide det :o)! Tom got up at half past eight. He didn’t wait for his brothers (der skal IKKE komma her, da der ikke er et subjekt i begge sætninger på hver side af det komma, du ville have sat før ‘but’) but went into the street, where he and some other guys started to pelt each other with snowballs. Suddenly, (komma kan udlades, men mest korrekt med, da det er efter et adverbium) they heard the sound of (‘a’ skal væk her, da det ikke er et glas, der tabes, men bare lyden af glas) glass that (bedre end ’which’, da sætningen flyder nemmere i denne uformelle tekst) fell onto the ground. Tom had hit a fire alarm (uden bindestreg), and the other boys quickly ran (adverbium før verbum mest korrekt) away. Two minutes later, the firemen arrived. ’There is no fire,’ Tom said (omvendt ordstilling sikrest, selv om verbum før subjekt også ville have været accepteret her, fordi det er direkte tale’) . ’I broke the fire alarm (ingen bindestreg) with a snowball and thought (‘that’ skal væk, da sætningen vil virke for ‘tung’) I better (‘should’ skal væk, da forkert her) stay (‘here’ væk, da unødvendigt og typisk direkte oversat fra dansk) and tell the truth.’ – ’That’s right,’ answered the firemen, ’that is (komma væk) what everyone should do.’ An old gentleman, who heard what happened (simpel datid bedre end før nutid her, da det er en afsluttet handling), gave Tom 5 pound (komma væk) as (‘as’ bedre end ‘while’ her, da ‘while’ strækker sig over en længere periode, hvorimod ‘as’ henviser til en kortere periode - fx under en konkret handling som her) he said: (kolon før direkte tale) ’When I was soldier during (strækker sig over et tidsrum) the 1st World War, I saw many brave young men, and you have been just as brave as any soldier. ************* Good luck :o)!
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P.S. til #11 Som du kan se, er der ikke forklaring for alle rettelserne, da noget af det bare er/hedder sådan. Det, der er forklaring på, er skrevet i Kursiv :o)!
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